Amazing narrative writing

W.A.L.T to write a narrative.

We have been writing a narrative in class. My one is called the witch's ball. In a narrative you need a title,a setting, an introduction,a problem, a solution and a conclusion.  We had to do all of that but we had to also add a picture and we had to make it on Google Drawing and not get it off the Internet. How many narratives have you done?

The Witch’s Ball

Opening                                                                      Problem                                                       Solution 

“I can do this, I can do this” I chanted over and over again as I held up the glowing purple witch’s ball. It was amazing because I was about to become a full witch. The wizard said some funny words that sounded like abracadabrataflabra to me. Suddenly there was a blinding light and the pink arena where I was becoming a witch disappeared around me.

I woke up in a cold sweat. I looked around. I was in a creepy old house. As I walked around the house, it became more and more familiar. With a sudden jolt, I realised this was my house, just more dark and dingy. It was then that I heard some crying.

It was coming from the dusty kitchen I had explored earlier. I looked in and saw the most horrific sight. It was me lying on the floor, dead with a knife in my back. Mum was weeping, but being careful not to step in the pool of blood that surrounded me. Dad was looking on, forlorn. I felt a hard tap on my shoulder. Suddenly I was back in the present, staring at my Dad. 

It was a long drive home.”What happened  Dad? All I remember is touching the witch ball and then everything disappeared.”

“Well dear you touched the witch ball  and you fell to the floor, then we looked at your eyes and they were red like buttons”. At home I was very tired so I went to bed straight away.

I woke up at midnight hungry so I went downstairs to get something to eat. Suddenly I felt a sharp pain in my back and I knew at once that someone had stabbed me in the back

with a knife. I fell to the floor and closed my eyes and my last thought was that this is death... 

12 years later

So there I was, minding my own business in heaven when the big guy asked me to come to his office. He said ”Kylie, have you ever wondered how you could see into the future?” I had thought about it but I didn’t really care.

 “Not  really.”

 “Okay well, we found out that the witch ball was apparently a portkey to the future.” He told me calmly. 

“What! Did you mean like in Harry Potter!” I said hardly able to contain myself. 

“Why yes, you’re quite right.” That means,” I said taking a deep breath, '' “I must be related to Harry Potter!” I said my eyes shining! Then I had to do a bunch of DNA tests. They found