Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 5 and my teacher is Mr Gray. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 7 February 2020
Akaroa
Yesterday I went to Akaroa with my friend. It took 2 hours drive to get there. When we got out of the car our legs felt like jelly. First we went and had a picnic on the beach. While we were there we collected shells. Then we went to this old library that looks like a upturned boat. We looked in the visitors book. Some people were from Netherlands! Then we went and ice cream. I had orange choc chip flavoured. Afterwards we went to a playground. The paint was flaking off the bars and the flying fox was rusted so it wasn't a very good playground. Then we decided to drive home. We fell asleep on the way home. Then we dropped off my friend and we went home.
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