What is your favourite piece of punctuation?
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 5 and my teacher is Mr Gray. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 12 June 2020
Can you fix this paragraph?
WALT to make a paragraph with errors so people can fix them. Today we had to write a paragraph with errors so people could fix them. This is mine. today me mum and dad had to go for picnic it was fun. we brought jam and bread and currant buns. I found a cave and showed my friend scarlett, we had fun. then we got bored and went home.
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