Wednesday, 22 July 2020

Would you rather/ Persuasive writing

WALT Record arguments and back them up with evidence. Today in writing we did a "Would you rather?" The question was "Would you rather be a Lion or an Eagle.
Here is my argument:I would rather be an eagle, because I feel like they would survive longer in the wild as they can fly away from predators.
Eagles are also protected from predators by the Bald and Golden Eagle Protection Act.
Eagles have very strong and powerful claws so they can easily fight off the predator, and even if the claws are broken they can 120-160 km per hour.
Also the eagle only eats mice and rats, and they can’t hurt them. That is why I would rather be an eagle.
I enjoyed the task but I wish we had more time as we only had 10 minutes. What is a hard would you rather?




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  1. Anonymous24 July 2020 at 09:09

    Hi Kate its Mayah from New Brighton Cathiloc School I really like the writing, I like how you even put why you want to be a eagle, This is some good writing!! Bye have have a great day(:

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