WALT write a paragraph for the start of a story using imagery. Here is mine: I entered a serene like garden with a bright light at the end. When I reached it I saw the most astonishing thing. It was a long stairway that looks like it went on forever. It had varying types of flowers strung along the side. It led to bright fluffy clouds that looked like cotton candy. The steps shone brightly as though they had the newly polished. I walked up the stairs cautiously; the stairs seemed to sway beneath me. There was a bright light with pearly white gates as I entered heaven.
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