WALT write a game review. Today I made a ScreenCastify on a Minecraft world that I have been working on. It is a review of the game Pearl Diver which is available on the App Store. Here is the ScreenCastify:
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 5 and my teacher is Mr Gray. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 20 November 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Kia Ora, Kate! My name is Lily-Rose and I am from New Brighton Catholic School. You already know that but anyway. I really like your video especially because you did that in a short amount of time. I like how you had to dive down into the pearl to find the NPC. I also like how you had a command the teleported you to the front of the place. Making the name Pearl Diver must have been hard. You did really well. What is your favourite part about your review.
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