WALT write a story from another's perspective. Today two lambs of my teachers lambs came to class. They were called Tilly and Timmy and were so cute. We wrote a diary entry from the perspective of one of the lambs. Here is my diary entry:Today my dad brought me and my brother to a strange place I think they call school. On the outside it looked harmless but inside, oh boy, it was the worst place in the world. The smells were overwhelming and colours were crazy, but don’t even ask about the noise! It sounded the sky was ripping open and 100 million trees were falling to the ground. My dad put in probably the smallest pen in the world. Everything was different (well apart from Timmy, he was being his usually annoying lamb self). For once I was getting attention from everyone! I thought “Hey, I’ll tolerate the noise and everything else for a little bit of attention.” Then the door of the cage opened and me and Timmy ran out. We went for a bit of a walk and I enjoyed it (mostly). The smell was horrid but it was a bit quieter. To be honest I can’t wait to go home!
Has an animal ever came to your school?
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ReplyDeleteHey Kate this is very good my fav part was went you wrote ´its the worst place and the pictures are so cute <3
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