Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 5 and my teacher is Mr Gray. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, 19 May 2020
My bubble
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Kia ora Kate, I am Lily-Rose from New Brighton Catholic School. I really like your picture of who was in your bubble during lock down. It is detailed and it looks cool. Maybe next time you could make it more realistic because I know your hair is brown and it is not that long. Also does your mum have rainbow hair?! How long did it take to make the google drawing?
ReplyDeleteHi Lily-rose sorry about the hair, everyone says my hair is blondie brown and there wasn't a colour for that. My mum has a black/brown hair with streaks of red and yellow and I didn't really know how to do that? And also I don't really know how long my hair is so i guessed. It took me a while to find a bubble as the internet wasn't really working well. Who was in your bubble?
DeleteHello Kate its Aimee from New Brighton Catholic school this looks very entertaining to look at, In my bubble I had my mum, dad, sister, sister, and my little brother. Its very nice to see you had everything you needed If you had pets would you add them in your drawing?
ReplyDeleteHi Aimee sorry i forgot to add in my cat fuzzy,I will add her in next time. Wow, so you have three siblings. Did they annoy you much? Do you have any pets?
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